Conrad Rice

Doing good here so far. I thought that Arnold's conversation with his alarm clock was hilarious and well done, though you might have him wonder if he is insane a ...

Good so far. I thought that your dialogue was superb, but maybe a little long. Maybe consider clipping it for length. Your descriptions were very well done. You showed us ...

Alright. So far, this is a good story. I'll touch on the three things you wanted first, then some other things that I noticed. Dialogue comes first. You tried to ...

Name: Mirror, Mirror on the Wall Genre: Science Fiction Summary: A man injects himself with a form altering substance. Word Count: 2,627 Link: Thanks. :)

Hey, J, guess who's back? I know, you're saying, "I just reviewed some of his crap, how can he have more?" But I do. This story is in the same ...

You'll need to read my story "And All This But Mere Perceptions to understand a few things here. I wrote this story because I used something called "gene candy" in ...

Hey, J, guess who's back? I know, you're simply aghast at my return. :) Anyway, I have a little story that I'd like you to review. As always, I'll be ...

Stella, Firearris, I've reviewed yours. Next?

I found this to be a very interesting and unique piece, poetic in a sense. There's not much that I see wrong here. However, what interests me is the main ...

This was a good, heart touching story. That being said, there are a few things in there that might need to be addressed. First off, I kind of get the ...

I'm running out of things to just skim through and review on the forums, so I'm putting myself up here. I'll let you know what you can expect from me. ...

This was a very beautiful piece. You have wonderful powers of description here. I can't help but wonder if it would be better served as a poem perhaps? If you ...

I'll admit that this is something that has troubled me as well, and I've only written one, maybe two, fantasy stories. I agree with Sleeping Valor when she says that ...

Endings can be tricky things. Sometimes I'll find that a story just comes to an end, like that, and it's not too hard at . But other times you write ...

I'd say it would be a romance with strong paranormal facets. Obvious example, Twilight. Girl falls in love, romance. Vampire, paranormal. Girl falls in love with vampire, paranormal romance. At ...